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Friday, 13 December 2019

this is what i'm doing for the Neil Armstrong post here is my poem and little picture


2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Ruby,

    Wow, I love what you have created for this activity! The space background looks really cool with the person you have made, and the moon. Did you use google drawings to make everything? They look awesome!

    Your poem is also really great, did it take long to come up with? One thing I would suggest is to check you can clearly read the writing. Maybe next time you could try use a different colour for the font, since it's a little hard to see with the dark background.

    Other than that, awesome work!!

    Ngā mihi,
    Tayla

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  2. it did not take long to make but thank you sorry thank you again

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